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I went to the beach, it was a beautiful evening, and suddenly this wave of inspiration hit me. I quickly scribbled it down, took a few days to modify it, and this is the result. I'm really proud of it, also it's not really my usual style but it was fun to do. :heart:

The picture and poem both belong to me. The sunset is an older picture from the same beach I went to today, and it was absolutely gorgeous. It was also not edited in any way. :)

Please leave a comment if you liked it, or help me out with some constructive critisicm. Everything is appreciated. Go on, I can take it. :huggle:

Find the photo here: [link]
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cskadoz Mar 18, 2013   General Artist
:worship:
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Laeneris Mar 28, 2013  Student Writer
:bow:
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AkashasDreamworld Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful... It has a clear feel, yet somewhat mysterious and new (: It's really wonderful! :dummy:
I'm probably repeating myself, but so what xD
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Laeneris Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
I don't mind the repetition of compliments! :iconlabananadanceplz:
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AkashasDreamworld Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D Good, cause it's awesome :eager:
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baccaratta Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can see why, this is the best poem I've read in a long time.
The "breath in/out" part is unconventional but you make excellent use of it and it works very well.
Makes me jealous you have such beautiful sunsets, our sun is only up a few hours a day over here and I would love to spend a night at the beach enjoying a view like that.
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Laeneris Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
It is? :blush: Thank you so much! To hear that from a fellow poem (if I still consider myself one) means a lot. :iconlubplz:

I'm jealous of your aurora things up in the sky... hey, we should switch houses! :dummy: Kidding, haha. I do admit that we have nice sunsets here, although I'd never seen everything become pink before! :D
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baccaratta Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Feel honored to call you my fellow poem :heart:

No I couldn't do that actually x) And yeah the auroras can be a sight of a lifetime, we have some pretty sunsets here aswell but they are sometime far inbetween. should check out this one taken by uni photographer a few years back. [link]
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Laeneris Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
I feel a little bit stupid, I meant to say 'poet' :iconotlplz: Sorry!

That was a gorgeous picture by the way. Thank you for sharing!
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baccaratta Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wondered, but i'll just let it be so can we be stupid togethet :3 np :)
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