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Edit: A DLD? :faint: Please excuse me while I freak out (in a good way). Thank you! :iconawwloveplz:
This is, I guess, a continuation from Baby blue eyes.

There was originally a whole story to this, but in the end, I decided that all of the words added nothing. ^^; So I cut until this was all I had left. I guess it would also have been an infringement of Someone's privacy.

This is for everyone who's gone through abuse of any kind. It makes me incredibly sad to realize that in some cases things could've been prevented... or at least people could have gotten help...

Comments and critique appreciated as always, although I understand it's fairly short & a touchy subject so there might not be too much to talk about. Thank you for reading. :heart:
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Fellonie Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow grats on your DLD! I see why this got one. So simple but perfect. 
Laeneris Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student Writer
I was so happy when I got it. :D Though that made me feel a little bit uncomfortable, because I would much rather have the person this is for not experience any pain (then I wouldn't have written it, if that makes any sense). :(
BloodyMess-VaoT Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Says everything!
Gratz on your DLD!!!
Makes me kinda think of the call: Fire! thing.
Laeneris Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much!! :dance: I was so excited when I received one! :iconwantplz:
Ja-mes Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A heavy, heavy impact with so few words. Exemplary. Many congratulations for the DLD.
Laeneris Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much! :huggle:
DamonWakes Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013   Writer
It's weird, but with these single digit word count pieces, the title seems to be a huge factor in how well they work. If it doesn't say enough, it's a wasted opportunity. If it says too much, it looks lazy. This, I think, is just the right balance: the title sets the scene, the text tells the story. It's an important story, too: so often things could be changed if just one person spoke out, and so often they just stay the same.

Congratulations on the DLD! :-)
Laeneris Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student Writer
It does seem that way. :nod: It's a tricky balance between saying enough to add to the story, but not too much as to spell everything out before someone starts reading.

Thank you very much for your kind words. :heart:
pinballwitch Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Congrats on the DLD :nod:

Very chilling. Wow. Conveys a lot in so few words (including the title, of course).
Laeneris Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :huggle: There used to be much more to it, but looking back I'm glad I decided to cut those words. :)
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